<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">宜賓秋夜雨思</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:18px;">文/代強(qiáng)（安徽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">立秋過罷暑氣收，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">宜賓雨織暮云稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">街衢盡濕凝涼意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">客舍孤伶待遠(yuǎn)舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">九點(diǎn)歸心牽瘦骨，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">千燈曳影照離愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">憑欄攝取江天景，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">遙寄伊人萬(wàn)里秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>注：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“雨織暮云稠”寫秋天雨連綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“待遠(yuǎn)舟”暗喻等公交的急切。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“九點(diǎn)歸心”點(diǎn)出下班時(shí)間晚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“千燈曳影”描繪秋雨夜燈光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“攝取江天景”“遙寄伊人”呼應(yīng)拍照寄遠(yuǎn)方愛人之意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">全詩(shī)以涼、寂、急、思為脈絡(luò)，將日常場(chǎng)景升華為浪漫情致，意韻悠長(zhǎng)。</span></p>