<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二五年七月下社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韻十四寒作七言律詩(shī)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡(jiǎn)評(píng) ：梁正森</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：蔣孝余</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳大暑前四日曉起觀覽清水河水庫(kù)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一點(diǎn)青螺牽思遠(yuǎn)，四圍嘉氣放眸寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日輝寥宇紅浮影，霞映澄湖碧起瀾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野岸小尋添慨賞，晨風(fēng)閑步作吟觀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">磯邊漁釣鄉(xiāng)歌動(dòng)，大壩隆崇接翠巒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳大暑次日清水河水庫(kù)漫吟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?走石飛塵詎畏難，嚴(yán)霜染目意如磐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高空步月身姿瘦，長(zhǎng)夜照燈工地寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲老壩成千載利，陽(yáng)驕水壅寸心丹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頻年櫛雨勞人苦，汗灑流風(fēng)蔚壯觀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):水利人治水，如魚(yú)飲水，冷暖自知。功在當(dāng)代，利在千秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【劉先倫】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">悼葛老鎮(zhèn)亞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今夜無(wú)端共酒殘，扶搖托月化雕鞍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">海龍囤上揪心苦，楊柳街前老眼酸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何用詩(shī)詞書(shū)韻事，不如史實(shí)話悲歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本知此去蓬萊遠(yuǎn)，故把輕車(chē)換鶴鸞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):斯人已逝，永照丹青。黔北文物，全仗葛公得以聞名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳季夏朔日新學(xué)釀果酒有寄</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今朝雨打濕雕欄，夕照幽林天地寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">壟畝千層清水遠(yuǎn)，荷香幾縷暮山殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">摘來(lái)李柰兩三捧，欲釀詩(shī)書(shū)一二壇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若是君心真有意，何需王母遣青鸞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):酒熟年豐，詩(shī)成客何處。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">偶有失眠隨想</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羸軀不敵五更寒，鐘鼓頻摧曉夢(mèng)殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深度成眠誠(chéng)不易，險(xiǎn)灘涉水實(shí)艱難。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醒遲醒早憑天意，孰假孰真費(fèi)藥丸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人順自然心態(tài)穩(wěn)，何須學(xué)步到邯鄲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):老去睡眠少，詩(shī)從枕上來(lái)。邯鄲仍有夢(mèng)，彩筆如花開(kāi)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉誠(chéng)】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">過(guò)杜家陵園</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頹然塋貌幾多殘，憑吊先生整衣冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此日鄉(xiāng)間傳軼事，當(dāng)年城防得民安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">精魂耿耿英靈振，往歷昭昭氣節(jié)端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">效仿北山歸隱處，杜家林內(nèi)影盤(pán)桓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?注：杜家陵園系遵義新舟小學(xué)創(chuàng)始人杜希陵先生家族陵園，內(nèi)有先生及三位夫人墓，另有杜希陵先生次子杜叔機(jī)之妻趙氏夫人墓。先生晚年回鄉(xiāng)新舟，效仿遵義開(kāi)科進(jìn)士李先立，自營(yíng)生壙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):英靈仍在，氣節(jié)昭昭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">納涼共青湖畔</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一望湖心漾玉盤(pán)，輕風(fēng)拂過(guò)水波寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蟬鳴斷續(xù)隱林樹(shù)，蛙鼓疏狂喧草灘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)點(diǎn)飛螢頭上繞，悠悠釣客岸旁看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四周墅舍華燈炫，流彩盈眸暑氣闌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):爽氣西來(lái)，螢火蛙聲，可以浮一大白。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【謝 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳年潤(rùn)六月初四日晚歸有懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人在底層諸事難，為爭(zhēng)微利晚收攤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翟門(mén)失勢(shì)鳥(niǎo)常落，食店轉(zhuǎn)艱心欲寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入目炎涼多感慨，勞形歲月只辛酸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蕭條市井營(yíng)生淡，論世何曾水墨乾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評(píng):長(zhǎng)太息以掩涕兮，哀民生之多艱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">賀龍社成立十周年兼寄李勇兄</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)雅十年同此歡，郢詞齊至彩毫端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盈編珠玉供人賞，陳賀文章灑墨乾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">結(jié)社須追蓮?fù)羶簦瑢ふ娴R(shí)井閭難。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斯民應(yīng)抱憂時(shí)意，詩(shī)逐陽(yáng)春春已闌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):賀詩(shī)誠(chéng)不易。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【梁正森】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">在路上</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">走村竄寨路何難，涉水登山意似盤(pán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼穿云思上下，酸風(fēng)破霧悟高寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林深樹(shù)密蟬聲懶，天淡陽(yáng)驕鳥(niǎo)影殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">問(wèn)道溯源無(wú)遠(yuǎn)近，此心安處此心寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丹寨災(zāi)區(qū)行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秘境人間啼笑難，停停走走抑悲歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水洗家園余骨瘦，浪淘形影剩心寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枯藤老樹(shù)攔腰斷，翠竹青杉委地殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿目瘡痍添感慨，回車(chē)問(wèn)路久盤(pán)桓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">伏天臆想</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月底催詩(shī)左右難，經(jīng)營(yíng)意象到毫端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飲冰五內(nèi)仍肝火，止沸三焦疑胃寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠暑蓮荷青玉案，降溫李柰水晶盤(pán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清風(fēng)何處攜團(tuán)扇，夜半流螢撲繡簾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評(píng)：拙作，打胡亂說(shuō)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">村 夜</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煙光漸淡夕陽(yáng)殘，向晚纖云掩翠巒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小閣霓燈生異彩，廣場(chǎng)舞樂(lè)繞長(zhǎng)欄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳當(dāng)水岸千絲潤(rùn)，月在天邊一點(diǎn)寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不覺(jué)蟲(chóng)吟村夜半，關(guān)門(mén)倚枕悵盤(pán)桓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>注 ： 悵盤(pán)桓 ：王粲《登樓賦》“夜參半而不寐兮，悵盤(pán)桓以反側(cè)”，表達(dá)夜半難眠，思緒紛擾的狀態(tài)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):老祝睡不著，想老伴了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【鐘 華】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">七七祭父</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七七流光悄自闌，空庭落照影猶寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊衫疊處塵初積，殘墨凝時(shí)字未干。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)過(guò)疏簾疑步履，月移窗隙憶盤(pán)餐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紙錢(qián)燒盡灰還卷，知是慈親不忍看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):樹(shù)欲靜而風(fēng)不止，子欲養(yǎng)而親不在。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">隔屏見(jiàn)師門(mén)小聚，尤憾甲辰長(zhǎng)沙行無(wú)書(shū)小跳未能成聚</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望斷關(guān)山客路難，隔屏艷羨只余酸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾期共剪西窗燭，卻負(fù)同傾綠蟻歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鬢上霜痕空自積，眉間憾意未容寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何時(shí)再續(xù)當(dāng)年約，莫使相思入夢(mèng)闌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評(píng):西窗燭影，南浦水聲。綠蟻新酒，相思何憑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">夏 夜</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">更深月上竹珊珊，石案茶香入夜殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">露墜青梧珠碎玉，星垂碧落斗垂欄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕搖蒲扇驅(qū)浮暑，靜聽(tīng)晚風(fēng)亦盡歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偶有流螢穿竹過(guò)，恍隨清夢(mèng)拂冰紈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評(píng):雖云夏夜，境界清涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周?chē)?guó)慶】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">應(yīng)體偉兄邀乘陳兄義剛伉儷車(chē)東行永樂(lè)途中所見(jiàn)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">數(shù)轉(zhuǎn)迂回繞翠巒，驅(qū)風(fēng)逐日路漫漫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旁車(chē)側(cè)軸跐煙起，阿嫂驚心喚客看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少駐扶將憑指實(shí)，重行點(diǎn)檢復(fù)隨鞍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑談徑向仙鄉(xiāng)去，倍覺(jué)眼前天地寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng): 駐足停車(chē)，風(fēng)景無(wú)限。手揮五弦，地遙天寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學(xué)鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">龍社十年慶于遵義遙賀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白山黑水返猶難，極北回看夢(mèng)未殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半世征程仍寂寞，十年歸客亦蹣跚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩(shī)情常向梅邊和，世事長(zhǎng)從壁上觀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">似臥冰城聽(tīng)潮語(yǔ)，恍如那歲枕江干。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">評(píng):梅邊和詩(shī)，枕上聽(tīng)潮。征程不斷，世事靜觀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">車(chē)行息烽道中</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">車(chē)到山頭力已殫，路來(lái)心上幾縈盤(pán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千峰立影窗間逝，卌載流光指上彈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">似入云霞明滅處，如迷詭幻有無(wú)端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而今忽憶少年事，逐夢(mèng)情懷未二般。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評(píng):這該死的青春，眨眼就殺割。這悖時(shí)的命運(yùn)，甩都甩不脫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">憶二十五年前隆冬登海龍囤</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遙望孤山血色殘，荒城懶臥似龍?bào)础?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銅關(guān)鎖月憑關(guān)易，虎隘封喉破隘難。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絕險(xiǎn)如斯堪據(jù)守，雄強(qiáng)尚在忍留看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千巖萬(wàn)轉(zhuǎn)風(fēng)云路，古道空余暮雪寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評(píng):海龍囤上風(fēng)兼雨，斷辟殘碑不忍看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p>