<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 錄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩 二、選萃詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩 四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 夏至</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">弱柳垂湖伴綠蘅，驕陽蟬唱隱蛙鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾尋花鵲慌陶暑，更問清荷散酒酲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠(yuǎn)岫云天催驟雨，近疇壟畝務(wù)勤耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山川錦繡多詩韻，仲夏瑤圖潤美情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破陣子(雙調(diào)). 習(xí)詩有感 (依晏殊體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常眺遠(yuǎn)山瞰世，閑探近水搜寥。言志秀峰云壁聳，抒意清流萍藻漂。爽心獨(dú)品簫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">意境霓虹絢彩，謀篇蓬蓽藏嬌。聲韻抑揚(yáng)勤勘誤，格律揉磨愿鑄陶。逸翁綠茗邀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慶祝黨的生日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅船破浪經(jīng)千險，砥柱擎天歷萬春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星火燎原開偉業(yè)，錘鐮拓路為斯民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高揚(yáng)赤幟山河秀，永秉初衷日月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">華夏同歌昌運(yùn)曲，復(fù)興逐夢見忠純。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寫在高考時</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十年砥礪苦書生，但愿今朝一試成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每伴孤燈研課卷，常披曉月忘晨羹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">親恩總盼前途錦，子志猶期世路平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高考競馳終得幸，龍門喜躍有題名。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高考感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大考如期六月來，天擇驕子見良才。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無涯學(xué)海揚(yáng)帆起，再創(chuàng)輝煌偉業(yè)開。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林都夜詠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒼山（盛軍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燭影搖紅映暖光，烹茶煮酒夜來香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西斜皓月云樓掛，北上銀河星海藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今昔詩吟歌盛世，明朝墨筆贊輝煌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小城大市門楣敞，古韻融情比宋唐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄭坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山逢雨霽，碧水繞城流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛙鼓池塘側(cè)，蟬鳴矮樹遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高溫生濕氣，悶熱苦身收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隨意尋芳歇，休閑自在謀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跳莎行?少年強(qiáng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 許國修身，讀書待曉，雛鷹振翅青云藐。少年策馬競天驕，流光若夢爭分秒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 御敵承宣，為民奉召，志行敢把千關(guān)掃。擎旗執(zhí)戟撼長城，時時報(bào)與江山好。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔赿調(diào)·天凈沙〕快樂臺球（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀聲林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">臺球滾滾圓圓，球桿細(xì)細(xì)尖尖，球案端端面面。天天練練，退休人變球仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">臨江仙?仲夏有作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紫燕頻縈堤岸，荷花輕染霞腮。枝頭鶯唱和聲諧。暖風(fēng)翻碧浪，香霧漾田垓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遙憶陶潛舊事，輕吟曲賦悠哉。遐思縷縷任舒懷。詩情隨興起，愜意更相偕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沁園春.仲夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭曉春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 赤日當(dāng)空，熱浪翻騰，蟬噪樹梢?？春商辽钐帲唑腰c(diǎn)水；柳蔭底下，老嫗閑聊。瓜果堆盤，涼茶滿盞，蒲扇輕搖暑漸消。黃昏近，有流螢數(shù)點(diǎn)，飛過溪橋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 夜來暑氣難熬，引多少人家出戶瞧。見廣場內(nèi)外，舞姿曼妙；公園左右，歌韻飄搖。老漢圍棋，孩童追跑，情侶相依語氣嬌。當(dāng)此際，縱空調(diào)冷氣，難比逍遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仲夏即景（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">靄霧纏巒繞勁松，若仙施露濾云空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煙薄浩渺蒼穹漫，唯見東方一片紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三十年前我的高考</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">葛玉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卅載流光憶舊年，黌門追夢意拳拳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初篩若隘千軍競，獨(dú)步如危萬馬懸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜伴寒燈書作枕，晨沾冷露卷為船。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今觀大道通云際，猶念曾經(jīng)逐浪巔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開放查分前夜通宵未眠等外孫龔鍇報(bào)捷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)木橋橫萬馬鳴，逆流而上化龍爭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒窗苦育鵬翅展，云路終憑志氣成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">計(jì)日唯期登榜首，懸心強(qiáng)坐到天明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">困中忽聽靈禽語，應(yīng)是佳音傳曉聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五指山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群巒環(huán)抱象形巔，綠植蔥蘢負(fù)氧鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熱帶珍稀生物聚，雨林奇異水源綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">石峰陡峭突嶙立，紅谷幽深浪急潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹海榭亭潭瀑繞，云飄霧渺瞰河妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">.少年游·春游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呂彬華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 春陽暖暖照芳郊，遍野競嬌嬈。垂釣魚父，牽鳶童子，身影傍溪橋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 歡歌快馬蘭舟下，萬念此間消。倩影雙雙，盛顏?zhàn)谱?，猶待燕歸巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高陽臺*晚風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 芳鸞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 踏月追星，牽云織雨。回旋燈火闌珊。一縷柔情，悄拂靜室幽軒。云天奏響空靈韻，落寒塘，泛起清漣。問荷魂，幾度枯榮，皆惹人憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紅塵往昔堪追憶，是蝶痕燕影、共舞心弦。鋪雪為箋，欲寫塵世千般。臨霜垂鬢風(fēng)前柳，正沉吟，舊夢難刪。借輕風(fēng)，洗盡鉛華，漸改朱顏。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觀林海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王振芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">腳踏星晨觀林海，松濤滾滾際蒼穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浪高卷起千重綠，鶴遠(yuǎn)悠飄百里篷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野草人參生紫氣，荒山猛虎嘯雄風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銀河碧水流湯旺，云散朝霞吐日紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天·黨旗耀征程</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 小松鼠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤幟高擎映碧穹，百年逐夢貫長虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">脫貧展卷開新宇，致富圖強(qiáng)建偉功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巡瀚海，衛(wèi)遙空，興科振業(yè)惠千重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金甌一統(tǒng)民心聚，大道偕趨向大同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏夜情</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丁乃忠 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏夜蛙鳴訴燥天，涓流溪水繞村前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清灣荷上獨(dú)私語，菡萏搖情月影圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星海廣場飼鷗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 范連韌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深海藍(lán)潮映日紅，長橋橫跨勢標(biāo)雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人搶鏡金堤上，群鳥銜糧玉手中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">展翅精靈穿曉霧，嚶聲雅態(tài)帶清風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此身暫與塵囂遠(yuǎn)，心共云鷗遨碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天·六一感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">回憶兒時趣事豐，摔跤格斗樂無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿林捕鳥追山兔，攀樹爬墻捅馬蜂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">泥里滾，地頭瘋。校園聽到打球聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幼年玩伴今何在，霜染青絲變老翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮齡情懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與世無爭少欲求，胸懷坦蕩不言愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高齡最怕親人遠(yuǎn)，過日尤憂記憶丟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛙啼夜曲農(nóng)庭靜，鶴唳松風(fēng)暮色幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步景抒情添雅趣，敲詩醉韻度春秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少年游?戍邊中校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老疙瘩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 絡(luò)腮胡子，邊防哨卡，鐵面忘枯榮。貼近陽光，勻開寂寞，褶皺寫農(nóng)耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 肩頭那只完膚手，不似高原兵。雪域春聲，故園秋夢，一笑慰龍城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乙巳夏巧遇恩師</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張永學(xué)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">八四童顏步履鏘，杏壇執(zhí)手歷滄桑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝修每在春寒處，苗育常于夜漏長。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃李成林分五岳，芝蘭滿室布三湘。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古稀幸遇雙星矍，祝愿期頤共舉觴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江城子.一架薔薇（新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 華久霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 筆耕不輟半仙翁，筆生風(fēng)，墨含情，一架薔薇，霧里笑盈盈，彩色含聲歌詞賦，香峻嶺，晚霞紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一花一木意無窮。線條精，色分明，，鶴發(fā)童顏，寫意大人生，忙碌紅塵無憒憾?；町媰裕瑤r之松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 夏至林都</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李風(fēng)山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋芳時序始陰生，滴翠興安百鳥鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)處花間知靜好，相看樹下賦怡情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萋萋碧草托山艷，郁郁森蔭浸骨錚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">值此超然人向往，納涼吸氧一毛輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天.感悟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相運(yùn)臣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季輪回暑易寒，霜華盡染綠林丹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕狂年少躊躇志，半百無功心內(nèi)酸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕陽照，莫扶欄，霞光萬縷最奇觀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飄香翰墨書佳句，史冊增輝報(bào)吉安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初夏夜涼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠(yuǎn)望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明月不歸煙雨生，半山澗水靜無聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南風(fēng)吹送稻香味，只聽樹梢鶯夜鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">參觀2025年上海國際花展感嘆(七古)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 常剛 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠閑漫步植物園，萬紫千紅迎夏天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">向陽花木映日色，曲徑通幽如自仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃紅柳綠彩蝶繞，藍(lán)天碧水情意牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滄桑笑看人生事，白發(fā)何須輸紅顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游園已罷躲酒館，幾碟小菜擺桌前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一壺香茶江南色，兩塊甜瓜上海灘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美味佳肴皆成韻，繁花勝景醉人間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">且歌且行載詩賦，紅塵追夢莫等閑。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燭影搖紅*夏至(詞兩首.毛滂體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠意昭然，興安夏至風(fēng)光燦。青山碧水緊相連，人旅桃花堰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秀麗山川無限。水中荷，花香四漫。清風(fēng)朗日，錦繡林園，俏顏美面。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨蒙蒙，沃田滋潤禾苗燦。生機(jī)勃勃綠油油，喜壞莊家漢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阡陌鐵牛馳遍。撒農(nóng)藥，滅蟲護(hù)畈。鏟趟除草，苦累不懼，不嫌流汗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻刁老前輩【燭影搖紅?夏至1-2】（新韻-毛滂體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（1）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深綠涂巒，冰城夏至層林燦。山山水水景怡人，最美江堤畔。柳翠蘆青卉艷。菡銜珠，透明瞳嵌。鷗鳧覓侶，鯉鯽歡游，波光瀲滟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（2）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨潤畦田，東郊沃野禾苗燦。蒼穹俯瞰翠鋪園，長勢極嬌艷。貴在黎元勤產(chǎn)，灑農(nóng)藥，施肥澆灌。貪黑起早，辛辛苦苦，耕耘閬苑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻刁老前輩《燭影搖紅·夏至》（新韻-毛滂體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原野蒼然，硒都夏至田園燦。山川嶺陌遍風(fēng)光，客旅河湖岸。景色連綿不斷。柳垂絳，似幃如幔。鴨鵝戲水，錦鱗追逐，雌雄熱戀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨灑江天，畦園潤染禾苗燦。欣觀大地綠無邊，寫下心中愿。滅草殺蟲勤鏟，早澆水，多趟防旱。田間管理，焉能懈怠，辛勞苦干。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燭影搖紅?夏至（詞二首毛滂體）步韻刁老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瀚海蒼茫，跳珠濺玉粼光燦。濤聲激蕩卷千層，浪起驚堤堰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千里滄波無限，棹如飛、追逐遠(yuǎn)漫。云舒云卷，霧凝霧去，朦朧水面。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登島之巔，靜臨海水流光燦。逍遙一刻爽心神，氣若凌霄漢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠(yuǎn)眺島城千遍，盡綺色、瓊樓綠畈。觀橋望塔，賞閣識居，淋風(fēng)灑汗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 荷塘小記</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盡賞蓮池慕雅名，忽聞云際響雷驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曛風(fēng)曼舞紅花顫，冷雨紛飛翠葉擎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">權(quán)借塘波蛙躁鼓，僅憑岸靜犬無聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倚欄偶見金鱗動，方曉東山玉魄盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律?荷塘小記》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷池菡萏冠芳名，雷電撕云昊宇驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨擊湖蓮葉響，熏風(fēng)撫蕊嫩莖擎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠(yuǎn)邊聽見犾私語，近處傳來蛙鼓聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倚在圍欄觀鯉戲，方知玉魄映塘盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律·荷塘小記》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不愧荷花冠雅名，嬌顏嫵媚眾人驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)拂玉蕊隨風(fēng)動，露染青盤頂露擎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岸畔枝頭聞鳥唳，池塘葉下鼓蛙聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣觀魚戲蜓蝶舞，才曉東方皓月盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷塘小記步韻吳老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不染淤泥享盛名，荷塘凝碧水芝驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花如星耀迎風(fēng)擺，葉似裙飄向日擎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉露沾香添錦色，清波弄影碎瓊聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿偕君子長相伴，獨(dú)守芳心自嬌盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 黃槐聯(lián)想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨野叟享晞陽，絢彩朝霞萬縷芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">排樹頻搖觀葉翠，孤身展轉(zhuǎn)嗅花黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">安能老葛扶巖立，愿有新槐列梓鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金綴枝頭聽賀語，錦袍莫負(fù)孝高堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：黃槐古寓意科舉高中，佑護(hù)吉祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻吳老師《七律?黃槐聯(lián)想》（新韻-嵌句詩）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑翁信步沐朝陽，舉目云霞萬束芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銜露新槐潔葉綠，含羞古樹現(xiàn)花黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">警察清路孩圓夢，考場開門子入廊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十載寒窗金榜賀，錦袍莫負(fù)孝高堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻吳老師《七律·黃槐聯(lián)想》（新韻-嵌句詩）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨觀槐樹沐朝陽，枝影婆娑萬縷芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">全借熏風(fēng)爭葉綠，專憑烈日繡花黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雛鷹可立鯤鵬志，弱木能擎宇宙梁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十載寒窗磨劍利，錦袍莫負(fù)孝高堂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">促拍滿路花*芒種(柳永體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北國天變暖，云雀唱聲喧。筑巢家燕舞蹁躚。夏花艷艷，河碧水潺潺。芒種時節(jié)到，柳翠松青草綠，醉了興安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大忙農(nóng)穡時節(jié)，莊戶不輕閑。禾苗鋤草理田園。鐵牛聲響，田壟保苗鮮。農(nóng)事雖然苦，鄉(xiāng)親勤勞，定收碩果豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【促拍滿路花?芒種】（新韻-柳永體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 冰城天速熱，鳥雀密林喧。蜂蝶穿卉繞芯躚。百花濃郁，溝壑響淙潺。時節(jié)臨芒種，坡嶺畦田染綠，萬類寧安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 稻田忙種節(jié)氣，山寨不得閑。間苗鋤草弄畦園。農(nóng)機(jī)轟響，保?促禾鮮。早起忙農(nóng)事，雖苦含馨，智奪定會豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《促拍滿路花·芒種》（新韻-柳永體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 河邊楊柳綠，鵲叫紫鶯喧。追逐穿樹繞林躚。野花嬌媚，湖畔水流潺。陽熙天溫暖，松柏青蔥嶺翠，萬物皆安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 正值芒種節(jié)令，機(jī)械不能閑。保秧噴藥管農(nóng)園。人人忙碌，起壟促苗鮮。地里多流汗，真是辛勞，付出定換豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 勞動節(jié)遐思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧蓮搖拽隱蛙鳴，翠柳飛鵑頻勸耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稼穡勤勞千畝綠，科研奮斗萬圖宏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽逢細(xì)雨氤氳起，頓覺柔風(fēng)瀲滟生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每歲今朝歌眾志，韶光旖旎敬霞觥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律?勞動節(jié)遐想》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷下蟾蛙扯嗓鳴，頻催山寨快農(nóng)耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勤勞繪就千幅偉，奮進(jìn)書成萬卷宏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨綿綿擊菡響，柔風(fēng)陣陣蕩蘆生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">適逢節(jié)日懷春夢，播種豐收把酒觥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律·勞動節(jié)遐想》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蓮里青蛙亮嗓鳴，相邀布谷共催耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">田間汗灑糧堆滿，桌案心勞圖畫宏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">影碎清池荷晃動，風(fēng)搖菡萏景重生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人喧機(jī)響播春夢，等到秋豐舉酒觥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勞動最光榮(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修路連州外，架橋環(huán)宇通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登天覽明月，下?？`蛟龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嶺上栽松綠，田中種谷豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩歌開拓者，勞動最光榮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《五律?勞動最光榮》（新韻-嵌句詩）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游覽極方便，公交地鐵通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湖泊戲銀鯉，林海唳飛龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賞嶺蒼松翠，觀畦稻谷豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贊揚(yáng)耕作者，勞動最光榮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《五律·勞動最光榮》(新韻-嵌句詩)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游旅非常便，長途快客通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒼穹捧明月，瀚海鎖蛟龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">種樹山坡綠，耕田稻谷豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頌揚(yáng)工作者，勞動最光榮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 品茗論道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深宵悶坐苦思禪，雅事幽情慕玉泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">壺聚春江名勝景，品茶論韻化浮煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?品茗論道》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">靜夜沉思苦坐禪，幽幽雅韻醉清泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愛融春水沏珍愛，一縷柔情化靄煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻吳老師《七絕·品茗論道》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜靜更深苦悟禪，冥冥之際飲甘泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一壺茗品清馨腑，夢境幽幽化霧煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻衣非老師《七絕·頌春》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨綻桃花映宇空，垂絳楊柳蕩春風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">折枝剪葉廳堂飾，茗伴清香沁腑中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 夏韻同歡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">推窗霽月趁風(fēng)涼，蟬倦緘聲柳葉藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菡萏旋珠花影動，喧天蛙鼓戲鴛鴦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?夏韻同歡》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平湖冷月上空涼，夏夜瑤池蘆葦藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銜露仙荷銀影動，蟾蛙菡下戲鴛鴦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金明池.天闊云高</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">僧揮（宋代）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 天闊云高，溪橫水遠(yuǎn)，晚日寒生輕暈。閑階靜、楊花漸少，朱門掩、鶯聲猶嫩。悔匆匆、過卻清明，旋占得余芳，已成幽恨。卻幾日陰沉，連宵慵困，起來韶華都盡。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 怨入雙眉閑斗損，乍品得情懷，看承全近。深深態(tài)、無非自許，厭厭意、終羞人問。爭知道、夢里蓬萊，待忘了余香，時傳音信?？v留得鶯花，東風(fēng)不住，也則眼前愁悶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">簡單說一下這首詞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張耀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 這首詞為傷春懷人之作。長天空闊，白云高遠(yuǎn)，小溪橫在眼前，溪水汩汩流向遠(yuǎn)方，傍晚時輕寒生起淡淡的日暈。庭院里十分安靜，隨風(fēng)飄飛的楊花已漸漸少了，朱門輕掩，已到了暮春時節(jié)，只有黃鶯的啼聲還同從前一樣?jì)赡?。這暮春景象讓詩人感慨，時光易逝，一過了清明，各種各樣的花兒就要陸續(xù)凋謝了，花從中和枝頭只疏疏落落地留了一點(diǎn)兒殘英。這本已讓人悵恨，更何況連著幾日陰沉的天氣，詩人幾日慵困，等他起來時連疏落的殘花也都落盡了，這怎不讓人傷感呢?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">面對著暮春景致，詩人滿懷都是傷春心事。春去無情，更因春而思人，滿懷怨恨讓他雙眉緊蹙，剛品得這份情懷，自然特別看待、極其親近。情動于衷而形于表，詩人因春去而心怨，因心怨而神形繾綣，終日精神萎靡，羞人問詢。誰知道，他在夢里又與心上人相會，待忘了余香，卻又時時傳遞音信?？墒强v然留住了黃鶯和鮮花這等美麗的春景，東風(fēng)不停留，還是無法消除詩人心中的愁悶。因?yàn)榇喝H是引子，最傷心處，并非春天美景消逝，而是時間流逝人老去--春天可以再來，人卻難以再少!無言之傷，盡在其中矣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 僧揮(生卒年不詳)，又稱僧仲殊。俗姓張氏，字師利，安州(今湖北安陸)人。有《寶月集》，不傳。據(jù)《老學(xué)庵筆記》: 僧揮少為士人，游蕩不羈。他的妻子投毒肉羹中，差點(diǎn)將他毒死，幸虧啖蜜而解。醫(yī)生告訴他:“再吃肉就會毒發(fā)，不可治療?！庇谑侵偈獬黾覟樯Ｉ畵]善寫詩詞，才思教捷，與蘇軾常有交游。一日，蘇軾與幾個客人拜訪僧揮，僧揮拿出的食物都以蜜制成。豆腐、面筋、牛乳之類，都漬蜜而食，非常甜膩。客人大多不能下箸，只有蘇軾也酷愛嗜蜜，能與他一同共餐。崇寧中，僧揮突然上堂向眾人辭別，這天晚上他關(guān)上方丈門自縊而死。死后火化，舍利五色，不可勝計(jì)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅船頌(七律兩首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南湖義舉起初航，馬列旌旗大地?fù)P。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破浪紅船除舊制，重生華夏建新章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">豐民富國輝煌業(yè)，虎將雄兵鋼鐵疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓夢更需加足勁，凝心聚力奔前方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">駕駛紅船圓夢航，中華大地凱歌揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歡騰九夏立新國，推倒三山寫錦章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碩果累累飛速業(yè)，利兵件件固牢疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恢弘偉績環(huán)球矚，睡醒雄獅震八方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律?紅船頌1-2》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（1）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歷險逐風(fēng)聯(lián)手航，紅船蕩水浪花揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">推翻舊制驅(qū)洋鬼，創(chuàng)建新規(guī)立憲章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炮火圍攻千座堡，刀槍捍衛(wèi)萬重疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中華大地旌旗展，引領(lǐng)軍民向遠(yuǎn)方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（2）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅船圓夢再前航，戰(zhàn)績恢弘世界揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沃野豐林描彩卷，強(qiáng)軍富庶韻華章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長城穩(wěn)固民添瓦，國域牢實(shí)眾護(hù)疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聽黨箴言跟黨走，青山永駐撼八方。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主辦：律詩審稿組</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策劃：刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯：吳華彪 陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼審核：陳國田</span></p>