<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">附《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">（通韻）原玉：</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">陳懋催</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">基似沙灘亦建樓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">工程質(zhì)量果含羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">外形哪有驚和喜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">內(nèi)架平添慮與愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">在意評說常放膽，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">擔(dān)心嘲笑每低頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滿懷熱望難拋棄，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">無奈時隨度夏秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">步韻和陳懋催老師</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">睿夫 </b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韻海揚(yáng)帆欲起樓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">詞窮筆鈍意多羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲字句三更苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斟酌篇章百慮愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夢繞詩田甘俯首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心隨雅趣自昂頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">但期琢玉終成器，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑看風(fēng)云度歲秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">依韻和陳懋催老師</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">□阮子武 </b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韻海揚(yáng)帆駕扁舟，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲字句愧無羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">搜腸每嘆才思淺，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">捻斷常因妙語愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">敢向先賢尋雅趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">甘從典籍仰風(fēng)流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">詩心若許終無悔，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑看霜華染鬢秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">(2026.06.27)</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">和陳懋催老師《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">奇風(fēng)</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">格律森嚴(yán)似楚囚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲平仄幾時休？</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三更易改詞中病，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五更難消韻里愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李杜文章懸日月，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘇辛筆力撼春秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">書生敢效擎天手，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">也向銀河借釣鉤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">敬和陳懋催先生《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">文/藍(lán)海清</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">畫屏開卷勝書樓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">點贊寥寥吾自羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">未敢騷壇聽絕唱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">不甘白首入凡流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三番測檢仄平誤，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五夜尋思句式愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯恐詩庸添笑料，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">手機(jī)忐忑又悲秋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">依韻和陳懋催老師</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《學(xué)詩感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">文/韋默爵（七里圣嵩)</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">打好根基可建樓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">腦瓜愚笨勿含羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">字詞缺少常嗟苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">語境平庸總犯愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">依韻和吟源引緒，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">命題創(chuàng)作感無頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">騷壇邁步期成就，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">安度余生享百秋。</span></p>