<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明：【芳草園】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊，均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.zit.org.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯(lián)對(duì)集錦組稿成員主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">6月20日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)軟池塘鴨戲閑（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨潤(rùn)蘭箋雅韻流（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)封故卷蠹侵函（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">午靜軒窗蝶夢(mèng)悠（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棋靜竹軒碎月流（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新榮野徑燕歸巢（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旭映園林鳥(niǎo)舞歡（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span 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class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笛響松林暗影移（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才開(kāi)雅牖月臨床（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜浸溪橋月色清（老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月洗竹軒詩(shī)興生（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半枯老樹(shù)葉隨風(fēng)（老?。?lt;/span></p> <p 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class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">難征遠(yuǎn)水雁沉池 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花艷階臺(tái)蝶舞翩（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照梅軒暗影斜（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新溫老酒客臨門(mén)（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月滿西樓蝶夢(mèng)寒 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月滿花林麗影嫻 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新翻青舍燕雕梁 (燕燕于飛)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮寂池塘蛙噪喧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劍舞竹林斜影搖（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新修古寺佛開(kāi)光（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜靜池塘蛙鼓悠 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨韻柳軒曳影搖 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新萌野蔓藤纏垣 (Ang.zq)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">煙鎖樓臺(tái)日起遲（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笛渺竹林暗影搖（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒廢鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">復(fù)蘇老樹(shù)鵲登枝（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮靄池塘蛙鼓喧（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳暗花溪醉影搖（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新栽柳浦鳥(niǎo)棲巢（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晝暖軒窗蝶舞輕 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棋靜松齋落子輕 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)閑幽徑草封門(mén) (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大暑池塘鯉躍歡（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月耀竹廬夜氣涼（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)閑沃土草當(dāng)家（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霽田園燕掠斜（於發(fā)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花好竹溪倒影搖（於發(fā)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新修別墅燕棲檐（於發(fā)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮熱池塘蛙鼓忙 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">詞美藕鄉(xiāng)雅韻隨 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才修老屋鵲登門(mén) (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霽池塘魚(yú)戲悠 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月灑蕉窗素影生 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久廢荒庭鴉落戶（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)空古宅草侵階 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)：</p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句：曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> “曉涼”：點(diǎn)明時(shí)間是清晨，營(yíng)造出清新靜謐的氛圍。</p><p class="ql-block"> “庭院”：限定了場(chǎng)景，給人一種熟悉的生活感。</p><p class="ql-block"> “蟬鳴細(xì)”：寫(xiě)蟬的鳴叫聲細(xì)微輕柔。清晨的蟬鳴不像午后那般聒噪，而是若有若無(wú)，更襯出庭院的幽靜。</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 微涼的早晨，庭院里傳來(lái)蟬兒的細(xì)微的叫聲。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句通過(guò)“曉涼”的天氣、“庭院”的空間和“蟬鳴細(xì)”的聲音，勾勒出一幅清晨庭院里微涼靜謐、蟬鳴幽幽的畫(huà)面，傳遞出一種閑適恬淡的意境。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們的對(duì)句詞工意美，非常精彩，和“曉涼”這一特定的時(shí)間段相契合的佳對(duì)舉例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">曉涼庭院蟬鳴細(xì)</span></p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)軟池塘鴨戲閑</p><p class="ql-block">旭映園林鳥(niǎo)舞歡</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)過(guò)湖堤鳥(niǎo)舞翩</p><p class="ql-block">雨霽花溪鶴舞翩</p><p class="ql-block">花艷階臺(tái)蝶舞翩</p><p class="ql-block">煙鎖樓臺(tái)日起遲</p><p class="ql-block">晝暖軒窗蝶舞輕</p><p class="ql-block">雨霽田園燕掠斜</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句：琴幽荷榭浮香動(dòng)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> “琴幽”：琴聲清幽，點(diǎn)明環(huán)境的雅致與靜謐。</p><p class="ql-block"> “荷榭”：荷花環(huán)繞的水榭，交代地點(diǎn)。暗示這是夏日或初秋的場(chǎng)景。</p><p class="ql-block"> “浮香動(dòng)”：“浮香”指荷花的香氣輕盈飄逸，“動(dòng)”字則讓香氣有了動(dòng)態(tài)感。</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 琴聲清幽地從荷花環(huán)繞的水榭傳出(或傳進(jìn))，荷花的香氣四溢。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句以“琴幽”的聽(tīng)覺(jué)、“荷榭”的視覺(jué)和“浮香動(dòng)”的嗅覺(jué)，勾勒出一幅荷榭聽(tīng)琴、香氣浮動(dòng)的詩(shī)意畫(huà)面，傳遞出清雅悠然的意境，仿佛讓人置身于靜謐美好的自然與人文交融之境。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們和出句意旨相契合，生發(fā)補(bǔ)充自然，詞工意美的佳對(duì)比比皆是。請(qǐng)師友們雅賞，不再一一舉例。</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句：久廢荒庭鴉落戶</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> “久廢”：點(diǎn)明庭院已荒廢許久，暗示無(wú)人打理。</p><p class="ql-block"> “荒庭”：庭院荒蕪，直接勾勒出荒涼的畫(huà)面基調(diào)。</p><p class="ql-block"> “鴉落戶”：“鴉”指烏鴉，常與荒涼場(chǎng)景關(guān)聯(lián)；“落戶”形象地寫(xiě)出烏鴉在此棲息筑巢，仿佛成了庭院的“主人”。烏鴉的聒噪或棲息之態(tài)，更反襯出庭院的寂靜與荒蕪。</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 荒廢很久的庭院中，烏鴉棲息筑巢，仿佛成了庭院的主人。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句是四三結(jié)構(gòu)，具有因果關(guān)系。以“久廢”的時(shí)間維度、“荒庭”的環(huán)境狀態(tài)和“鴉落戶”的細(xì)節(jié)，刻畫(huà)了一幅荒廢庭院中烏鴉棲居、滿目蕭索的畫(huà)面，傳遞出寂寥與蒼涼之感。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們從同向或反向立意賦對(duì)，理解豐富多彩。個(gè)人認(rèn)為當(dāng)以同向立意為佳 。師友們的詞工意美、生發(fā)自然的佳對(duì)舉例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">久廢荒庭鴉落戶</span></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)封故卷蠹侵函</p><p class="ql-block">尚存殘壁蘚生根</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)封山路草橫生</p><p class="ql-block">半枯老樹(shù)葉隨風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)閑幽徑草封門(mén)</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)閑沃土草當(dāng)家</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿：琢玉 荷花 雨燕 弦思 大海 老丁 梧桐 震撼哥 若水 燕燕于飛 文心 ANG.ZQ 閑云 淡定 美西洋 元其 於發(fā) 不亦l(xiāng)e乎 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后為序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二，雷同句以投稿先后順序選擇，其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有疏漏和不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片根據(jù)意境，由Al創(chuàng)作 </p>