<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">1</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕風(fēng)掃痛舊傷疤，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">癡雨不濕心中田，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">寂寞風(fēng)塵盡蒼涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">圖自繪</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季更新無古今，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人生如戲沒彩排，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)塵無岸重復(fù)來。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">3</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">籬上延蔓纏雅房，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭旁溪水?dāng)_書堂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">賦詩作畫案上忙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">4</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨吟詩情棉，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">彩云作畫含神，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">執(zhí)筆美景詩韻。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">5</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">苔肥擠滿老臺階，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">鎖銹殘門久未開，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">推門還聞灶臺香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">6</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">文字咬碎詩消化，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">色彩雜亂畫勾兌，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清風(fēng)莽撞弦安慰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">7</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">太陽不計歲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">月圓無古今，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人間是非重。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">8</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">屋殘蛛吐絲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">路荒育苔肥，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">樹老花孤開。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">朋友留言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">環(huán)環(huán)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣賞老師這組三行詩以簡練語言營造多元意境，如“輕風(fēng)掃痛舊傷疤”借自然意象道盡歲月滄桑，“人生如戲沒彩排”則感慨人生不可逆。 “籬上延蔓纏雅房”勾勒閑適山居，“苔肥擠滿老臺階”以荒蕪場景觸發(fā)鄉(xiāng)愁。“文字咬碎詩消化”體現(xiàn)創(chuàng)作狀態(tài)，“人間是非重”則暗含對世情的洞察。整體風(fēng)格含蓄凝練，通過具象畫面?zhèn)鬟f抽象情感，作品意象稍顯堆砌，若在留白與節(jié)奏上更考究會更耐品，為老師的精彩佳作點贊，祝老師端午節(jié)安康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與風(fēng)競速：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩中展現(xiàn)出獨特的文學(xué)魅力?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心靜：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">很喜歡這種風(fēng)格的三行詩????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嘿小巴郎子：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這些詩句精煉又富有感染力??</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">死神的愛情音律：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如此簡潔的詩卻蘊(yùn)含無盡的想象??</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">??：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩中的畫面感很強(qiáng)，超棒??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沖浪者g:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">想知道作者寫詩的靈感從何而來??</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">致命：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三行詩寫得妙，每句都似一幅畫??</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">永闖天涯：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩句簡短卻能傳達(dá)出深邃的意境呢??</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">徐鶴洋：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這些三行詩很有韻味，充滿詩意??</span></p>