<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">休閑小作，與友交流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·晚舟歸國</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（藏頭詩晚舟歸國）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起不入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚盼云開觀皓月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舟行曲水向家園。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歸鄉(xiāng)不懼風(fēng)波路，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">國滿歡歌只等閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:晚舟，指孟晚舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·本色天香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">題女兵芳華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春華秀麗勝紅妝，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡雅清純少粉霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本色天香花貌美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">含詩吐韻醉兵郎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·詩游草堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草屋花溪工部祠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘭園水竹少陵碑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春來夜雨柴門喜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰止千秋杜甫詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·賀壽辭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（藏頭詩道明高壽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">道法乾坤醒世言，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明心慧遠(yuǎn)大師軒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高天厚德行如水，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">壽歲松年鶴氣元。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·悼葉嘉瑩先生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 葉落星沉萬世悠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 嘉言懿德后人留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 瑩心醉浸詩書韻，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 先杰輝盈學(xué)子樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 生發(fā)才情揚(yáng)國粹，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 垂名史冊著風(fēng)流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 千秋雅頌傳佳話，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 古道飛云駕鶴幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2024年12月26日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·詠梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻 首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒天破萼綻芬芳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉面凝英韻自揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪壓凌枝猶挺秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜侵冷蕊更清香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰魂傲骨無爭艷，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏影仙姿不競妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驛使情真?zhèn)鬟h(yuǎn)信，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅花俏意報(bào)春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·紀(jì)念賀炳炎將軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">追思賀帥戰(zhàn)兇狂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鐵血驚魂瓦屋塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">威臨敵寇英雄顯，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">臂斷沙場美譽(yù)彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開天辟地豐功建，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">立國安邦偉業(yè)垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">軍民共仰恩情重，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩氣長存史亦留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·讀菜根譚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古卷輕開韻味長，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇思妙語蘊(yùn)華章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">為人警句如靈草，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">處世良言若藥方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">意向?qū)捄蛪m念少，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心懷淡泊俗風(fēng)涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清茶慢品人間道，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樂得安平歲月香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2025年3月3日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·獨(dú)釣晚霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕照南山放彩華，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋回雁蕩吐蘆花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斜陽射水紅云影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)處閑翁釣晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2024年12月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·題斗雞圖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤色紅冠霸氣昂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒光炯目顯威剛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金衣綠甲含鱗焰，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">利喙尖槍露劍芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">靜視眈眈凝對手，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心懷躍躍奪雞王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莊公妙語形同木，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紀(jì)子玄功話勝方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?注：后兩句出處</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莊子《達(dá)生篇》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·川江纖夫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自古川江畏險(xiǎn)灘，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千秋號子壓驚湍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">躬身伏首牽山影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏石攀崖拉岸磐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">血浸纖繩風(fēng)骨勁，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情融濁浪壯心瀾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鋼肩毅魄凌神女，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩氣揚(yáng)帆越萬巒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:神女，指三峽神女峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·佛心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山途橘落廟前坡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稚子躬身拾素柯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小手徐呈香果凈，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">童真向道老僧和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凝眸頓首情無盡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">合掌傾誠敬若何。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">善意禪形同映現(xiàn)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慈悲正覺佛心歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·山色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溪流翠嶺繞農(nóng)家，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霧掛青峰挽玉紗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">靜眺春風(fēng)江色影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空山鳥語唱天華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：1、空山鳥語，二胡獨(dú)奏曲曲名。2、天華，指《空山鳥語》曲作者劉天華，也指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美妙的春水山色。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·題山泉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山泉直下落青峰，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霧靄輕揚(yáng)繞勁松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">筆走春風(fēng)書韻逸，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云天潤紙墨香濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:《山泉》吳峰書法作品。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·天邊的連環(huán)畫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起不入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飛霞艷色真奇妙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫舞神靈墨意高。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巧繪丹青天際掛，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觀云賞畫俏童邀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·題金蛇狂舞照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金蛇吐焰染紅霞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧練垂空掛絳紗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕照熔光鋪瀲水，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橙波曳影閃奇葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云升紫氣繁榮景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浪洗春陽瑞?；ā?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤彩祥暉昭禹甸，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輝煌綺夢寄中華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律．漓江小景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句仄起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">九曲清流碧玉環(huán)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群峰浴紫晚霞斕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕舟一葉煙波里，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疊嶺千層倒影間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮靄蒙蒙迷遠(yuǎn)岫，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金暉脈脈染幽灣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漁歌逐浪江風(fēng)醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夢枕青羅共月閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:青羅，語出韓愈詩句“江作青羅帶”，代指漓江風(fēng)光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·老伴跳鍋莊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">康巴妙舞樂無窮，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕躍云姿落彩宮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水袖虹衣輕若羽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬌身雁影曼如鴻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩音入畫天仙境，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雅韻揚(yáng)屏玉女風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秀美鍋莊觀者醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歡言贊語有真功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·贊半忙人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藏頭詩鄧高如妙筆歌巴蜀平水韻首句仄起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄧?yán)衔牟乓畔桑?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高風(fēng)雁過斷鴻煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如來佛法冰心雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">妙意三觀智慧泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">筆落川康軍旅頌，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌飛桂魄月輪璇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巴州點(diǎn)戲回眸夢，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蜀色鄉(xiāng)音話母篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:1、鄧?yán)?，鄧高如將軍，重慶作協(xié)副主席。2、半忙人，鄧高如筆名，3、《斷鴻篇》獲冰心散文獎；《老太爺?shù)娜^》新華月報(bào)連載；記實(shí)文學(xué)《天變川康》，獲解放軍文藝一等獎；散文集《半輪秋》連續(xù)三次再版；新聞作品匯編《回眸》在軍內(nèi)外有很大影響；散文《娘在喚我》獲全國一等獎。4、如來，佛名:妙意，法師名；川康，地名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·題江峽日出照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群山峙立托朝陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日照云丹畫彩泱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百舸爭流天際去，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千濤拍岸石間揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粼光閃閃龍靈顯，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旭色彤彤紫氣彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤火江花神女醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中華玉蟒耀東方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注: 1、百舸爭流，引用教員詩句。2、江花，語出白居易《憶江南》。3、神女，指三峽的神女峰。4、玉蟒，比喻長江。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕·贊天路衛(wèi)士</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎風(fēng)傲雪飲寒煙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">影嵌冰峰鑄鐵肩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聳立云間霄路守，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雄姿映日比高天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·贊高考扁擔(dān)姑娘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韻首句平起入韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒窗十載出書堂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹擔(dān)輕裝向故鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕影肩挑芳夢遠(yuǎn)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粗衣腹蘊(yùn)錦華香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心平篤定鵬霄路，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">志睿秉持立雪章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑對征塵風(fēng)雨驟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飛鴻出采艷陽長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:“立雪章”，出自程門立雪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打油詩《理發(fā)》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老漢七十八，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">禿頂幾根發(fā)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剃頭兩三下，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收費(fèi)兒童價(jià)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">師傅手藝高，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剪出三毛畫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打油詩《童真》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姥爺?shù)纛w牙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孫說不用怕，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春天開了花，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又會長出它，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幼童天真話，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樂得笑哈哈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《水龍吟?秋日長城》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜天萬里澄明，旭陽初照長城路。丹楓似火，層林盡染，煙霞流注。雉堞巍峨，蜿蜒龍臥，氣吞今古。望山川莽莽，金輝漫灑，千秋韻、憑誰賦？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遙憶當(dāng)年烽火，戍邊人、夢魂曾駐。繁華過眼，興衰有數(shù)，豪情難負(fù)。歲月如流，壯懷依舊，此心長許。愿登臨縱目，風(fēng)吟逸興，共秋光舞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《臨江仙?寒嶺紅梅》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曙色初開霞照處，雪山云海茫茫。紅梅綻蕊韻悠長。冷香凝曉露，疏影映寒陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲月如詩皆入畫，憑欄思緒飛揚(yáng)。人間勝景意難忘。愿同梅共守，長醉此風(fēng)光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《蘇幕遮?梯田夕景》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮霞緋，山影翠。金縷斜暉，漫灑梯田內(nèi)。波漾田疇如幻繪。云繞峰巒，恰似仙鄉(xiāng)會。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">景迷人，心欲醉。歲月悠然，靜賞風(fēng)光最。塵世紛囂皆可退。愿伴余暉，長守田園味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《滿江紅?悼念黃旭華院士》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/趙建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩渺煙波，海天處，壯心凝矚。憶往昔，隱姓埋名，志如淵谷。卅載深潛家國計(jì)，一朝驚世蛟龍出?？淳搛L、蹈海衛(wèi)山河，功勛酷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忠魂去，英名馥。星璀璨，光猶煜。念科研瀝血，此生傾撲。瀝膽披肝為華夏，舍身許國情難贖。仰先賢、浩氣永昭垂，千秋肅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“DS”點(diǎn)評趙建元詩作中的人格鏡像與創(chuàng)作圖譜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 通過對趙建元二十余首詩詞的深度解析，可窺見這位創(chuàng)作者如多棱鏡般折射出的立體人格特質(zhì)。其詩作不僅是文字藝術(shù)的呈現(xiàn)，更是精神世界的全息投影，展現(xiàn)出獨(dú)特的性格光譜、深厚的生活積淀與鮮明的文化特質(zhì)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、家國情懷鑄就精神脊梁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在《晚舟歸國》《悼葉嘉瑩先生》《滿江紅·悼念黃旭華院士》等作品中，創(chuàng)作者展現(xiàn)出深沉的民族情結(jié)與文化擔(dān)當(dāng)。"歸鄉(xiāng)不懼風(fēng)波路"的錚錚鐵骨與"瀝膽披肝為華夏"的赤子丹心形成共振，折射出作者剛毅堅(jiān)韌的性格內(nèi)核。這種精神特質(zhì)在《川江纖夫》中升華為"血浸纖繩凝浩氣"的集體記憶，在《七律·詠梅》里凝練成"冰魂傲骨無爭艷"的人格象征，構(gòu)建起剛?cè)嵯酀?jì)的精神圖譜。其創(chuàng)作中頻繁出現(xiàn)的"千秋""萬世""史冊"等時(shí)空意象，顯露出超越個人際遇的歷史縱深感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二、生活淬煉成就審美境界</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者對現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的敏銳捕捉在《打油詩》系列中尤為耀眼。《理發(fā)》以"剪出三毛畫"的幽默解構(gòu)衰老焦慮，《童真》用"春天開了花"的童言重構(gòu)生命哲學(xué)，展現(xiàn)出入世而不俗的生活智慧。這種智慧在《老伴跳鍋莊》中轉(zhuǎn)化為"燕躍云姿落彩宮"的靈動觀察，在《梯田夕景》里沉淀為"靜賞風(fēng)光最"的審美自覺。其詩作既有"仰止千秋杜甫詩"的文化朝圣，亦不乏"獨(dú)處閑翁釣晚霞"的閑適自得，形成雅俗共賞的審美范式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三、文化基因塑造藝術(shù)品格</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">創(chuàng)作者對傳統(tǒng)詩學(xué)的深刻體悟體現(xiàn)在多重維度：格律層面嚴(yán)守平水韻法度，用典層面自如化用《莊子》《菜根譚》等典籍精髓，意象層面承續(xù)梅蘭竹菊的古典符號系統(tǒng)。七律《讀菜根譚》中"奇思妙語蘊(yùn)華章"的評述，恰是其創(chuàng)作理念的自我注解。這種文化自覺在《題斗雞圖》中升華為"莊公妙語形同木"的哲學(xué)思辨，在《臨江仙·寒嶺紅梅》里轉(zhuǎn)化為"歲月如詩皆入畫"的意境營造，展現(xiàn)出深厚的學(xué)養(yǎng)積淀與創(chuàng)新轉(zhuǎn)化能力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 四、創(chuàng)作傾向的辯證統(tǒng)一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其作品呈現(xiàn)出三組對立統(tǒng)一的美學(xué)特征：家國敘事與個人抒情的交響，如《紀(jì)念賀炳炎將軍》的壯烈與《山色》的幽靜形成張力；古典程式與現(xiàn)代語境的交融，《水龍吟·秋日長城》將"雉堞巍峨"的歷史感與"風(fēng)吟逸興"的當(dāng)下性完美縫合；雅言書寫與俚語表達(dá)的共生，《打油詩》的民間智慧與《七律》的典雅莊重構(gòu)成復(fù)調(diào)。這種多元創(chuàng)作傾向，既源于軍旅生涯與文士情懷的雙重烙印，也得益于對傳統(tǒng)文化的深度浸潤與當(dāng)代生活的鮮活體驗(yàn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趙建元的詩學(xué)世界猶如精心構(gòu)建的文化生態(tài)系統(tǒng)：家國情懷是深扎的根系，生活閱歷是豐沃的土壤，文化修養(yǎng)是挺拔的枝干，而多元創(chuàng)作則是繁茂的枝葉。這種創(chuàng)作格局既延續(xù)了"詩言志"的古典傳統(tǒng)，又注入了現(xiàn)代知識分子的精神自覺，在守正創(chuàng)新中開辟出獨(dú)特的詩性空間。其作品的價(jià)值不僅在于藝術(shù)成就本身，更在于為當(dāng)代舊體詩詞創(chuàng)作提供了傳統(tǒng)與現(xiàn)代、個人與時(shí)代有機(jī)融合的典型樣本。</span></p>