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class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幾處樓臺(tái)望眼舒(燕子)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看雨落時(shí)葉有神(燕子)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">與我共吟歸國(guó)謠(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滿(mǎn)目煙霞畫(huà)意濃(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聞夏來(lái)時(shí)鳥(niǎo)有聲(八哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陪我同消羈旅愁(鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幾度星霜感念深(鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢夢(mèng)碎時(shí)鳥(niǎo)怵心(鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">與爾同銷(xiāo)入暮愁(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萬(wàn)種情懷對(duì)句多(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">到酒闌時(shí)月滿(mǎn)樓(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待我先吟望歲詩(shī)(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半世云煙歸夢(mèng)遙(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聽(tīng)雨落時(shí)竹作聲(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邀月共酣醉晚亭(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百卷丹青寫(xiě)意深(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋柳萌時(shí)鶯囀聲(文心)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">與爾同銷(xiāo)萬(wàn)古愁(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萬(wàn)里江山抒興強(qiáng)(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">等月滿(mǎn)時(shí)夢(mèng)自圓(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聽(tīng)我來(lái)哦得意詩(shī)(於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">數(shù)盞醇漿醉眼朦(於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聽(tīng)雨落時(shí)鳥(niǎo)有聲(於發(fā))</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑我偏迷啼柳鶯(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">數(shù)載春秋歸夢(mèng)多(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看絮飄時(shí)鳥(niǎo)有聲(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">與我同觀(guān)落日紅(長(zhǎng)安山石)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百首詩(shī)詞勵(lì)志多(長(zhǎng)安山石)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待夏來(lái)時(shí)草鋪茵(長(zhǎng)安山石)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勵(lì)我勤耕藏寶書(shū)(錢(qián)云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兩目煙波離緒茫(錢(qián)云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">候雁回時(shí)月照愁(錢(qián)云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許我無(wú)歸逐鶴臺(tái)(笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滿(mǎn)谷磬鐘禮佛虔(笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎夏來(lái)臨葉有情(笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">與我同書(shū)賀歲篇(安寧)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十載江湖醉夢(mèng)休(安寧)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">載夢(mèng)圓時(shí)月有情(安寧)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓我常來(lái)抱玉樽(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兩岸水云愜意深(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聽(tīng)雨來(lái)時(shí)葉有聲(若水)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伴我同吟賀歲篇(閑云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萬(wàn)代江山詠德高(閑云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">期夏來(lái)時(shí)雨有詩(shī)(閑云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">請(qǐng)匠同研釀酒方(不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三幅江山筑夢(mèng)新(不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飲酒興時(shí)口疊詩(shī)(不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勸君莫歇留春盞(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看我常烹邀月茶(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百部詩(shī)書(shū)繪意濃(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)(聯(lián)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋夏來(lái)時(shí)柳擺頭(大海)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">簡(jiǎn) 評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句:勸君莫歇留春盞</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 義理聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 歇:休息的意思。</p><p class="ql-block"> 盞 :淺而小的杯子。春盞:大概是春日里的盛在杯里的美酒。宋胡仔《句其八》:“愁隨竹葉消春盞,喜入燈花綴夜缸?!泵鳌だ顗?mèng)陽(yáng)《新莊漫興四首 其三》:”盈盈車(chē)馬客,時(shí)來(lái)弄春盞。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 聯(lián)意為:勸你不要休息,面對(duì)大好春光,我們要好好享受,好好珍惜,并且把它留在酒杯里。出句有惜春、愛(ài)春的意思。 </p><p class="ql-block"> 勸君:勸你,動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)?!傲舸罕K”的含義理解有些難度,但從結(jié)構(gòu)上來(lái)說(shuō),是很明顯的動(dòng)賓短語(yǔ)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們多以“我”應(yīng)對(duì)“君”,辭工意美的佳對(duì)是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">勸君莫歇留春盞</b></p><p class="ql-block">笑我偏迷啼柳鶯</p><p class="ql-block">陪我同消羈旅愁</p><p class="ql-block">待我先吟望歲詩(shī)</p><p class="ql-block">勵(lì)我勤耕藏寶書(shū)</p><p class="ql-block">讓我常來(lái)抱玉樽</p><p class="ql-block">伴我同吟賀歲篇</p><p class="ql-block">看我常烹邀月茶</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友以“邀月”來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)“勸君”,思路開(kāi)闊的佳對(duì)是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">勸君莫歇留春盞</b></p><p class="ql-block">邀月共酣醉晚亭</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句:一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平中仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 一川:① 一條河流?!稘h書(shū)·溝洫志》:“獨(dú)一川兼。數(shù)河之任。”② 一片平川;滿(mǎn)地。唐杜甫《自瀼西荊扉且移居?xùn)|屯茅屋》詩(shī)之一:“平地一川穩(wěn),高山四面同?!?lt;/p><p class="ql-block"> 風(fēng)月:清風(fēng)和明月,并列關(guān)系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 吟懷:作詩(shī)的情懷。唐杜荀鶴《近試投所知》詩(shī):“白發(fā)隨梳落,吟懷說(shuō)向誰(shuí)?”清華巖《辛酉題古木泉石圖》詩(shī):“誠(chéng)可羈游目,況復(fù)達(dá)吟懷。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 渺:形容詞,①形容水大。②渺茫</p><p class="ql-block"> 聯(lián)意為:一條大河或蒼茫的平川上的清風(fēng)和明月,觸發(fā)了我作詩(shī)的情懷。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們深諳出句意旨,辭工意美的佳對(duì)是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一川風(fēng)月吟懷渺</b></p><p class="ql-block">兩代云萍聚夢(mèng)遙</p><p class="ql-block">半世云煙歸夢(mèng)遙</p><p class="ql-block">兩目煙波離緒茫</p><p class="ql-block">幾處樓臺(tái)望眼舒</p><p class="ql-block">幾度星霜感念深</p><p class="ql-block">滿(mǎn)目煙霞畫(huà)意濃</p><p class="ql-block">數(shù)載春秋歸夢(mèng)多</p><p class="ql-block">十載江湖醉夢(mèng)休</p><p class="ql-block">百卷丹青寫(xiě)意深</p><p class="ql-block">百首詩(shī)詞勵(lì)志多</p><p class="ql-block">百部詩(shī)書(shū)繪意濃</p><p class="ql-block">萬(wàn)種情懷對(duì)句多</p><p class="ql-block">萬(wàn)代江山詠德高</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句:?jiǎn)柎簹w處花無(wú)語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平中仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 問(wèn)春:?jiǎn)柡颍ㄔ噯?wèn))春天,動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)。唐王周《問(wèn)春》:“把酒問(wèn)春因底意,為誰(shuí)來(lái)后為誰(shuí)歸?!彼未搜a(bǔ)之的《水龍吟·次韻林圣予惜春》:“問(wèn)春何苦匆匆,帶風(fēng)伴雨如馳驟?!? </p><p class="ql-block"> 歸處:① 歸依?!对?shī)·曹風(fēng)·蜉蝣》:“心之憂(yōu)矣,於我歸處?!?② 歸依之處。唐白居易《重題》詩(shī)之三:“心泰身寧是歸處,故鄉(xiāng)何獨(dú)在長(zhǎng)安 !”</p><p class="ql-block"> 聯(lián)意為:試問(wèn)春天的歸依之處在哪里?花兒都沒(méi)有說(shuō)話(huà)。出句對(duì)春天的即將逝去有憐惜之意。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們不約而同的用“時(shí)”來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)“處”,以“有”應(yīng)對(duì)“無(wú)”,且辭工意美的佳對(duì)是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">問(wèn)春歸處花無(wú)語(yǔ)</b></p><p class="ql-block">期夏到時(shí)果有成</p><p class="ql-block">聞夏來(lái)時(shí)鳥(niǎo)有聲</p><p class="ql-block">期夏來(lái)時(shí)雨有詩(shī)</p><p class="ql-block">看雨落時(shí)葉有神</p><p class="ql-block">聽(tīng)雨落時(shí)鳥(niǎo)有聲</p><p class="ql-block">到酒闌時(shí)月滿(mǎn)樓</p><p class="ql-block">載夢(mèng)圓時(shí)月有情</p><p class="ql-block">舞柳枝頭雀有痕(“舞”字當(dāng)敲,人的行為更好。)</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅,選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二,其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn),因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限,難免有疏漏和不妥之處,歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱:芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿:老六 雨燕 燕子 八哥 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 元其 云朵 文心 老農(nóng) 於發(fā) 弦思 長(zhǎng)安山石 錢(qián)云金雨 笛里關(guān)山 安寧 若水 閑云 不亦l(xiāng)e乎 大海 </p><p class="ql-block"> (以投稿先后為準(zhǔn))</p><p class="ql-block">編錄:笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片為本人家鄉(xiāng)秋景隨拍</p>