<div>收錄:陳林(超樂(lè)人求是緣-永吉)</div><div>編輯:陳林(超樂(lè)人求是緣-永吉)</div><div>簡(jiǎn)評(píng):陳林(超樂(lè)人求是緣-永吉)</div><div>攝影:陳林(超樂(lè)人求是緣-永吉)</div>2021年8月湄潭對(duì)聯(lián)第四次作業(yè)。<br data-filtered="filtered">一、題目:請(qǐng)您對(duì)下聯(lián)。上聯(lián):咬文嚼字吐新作;(選自《對(duì)聯(lián)》)<br data-filtered="filtered">二、請(qǐng)聯(lián)友定稿后接龍發(fā)到群里。陳林負(fù)責(zé)收稿,8月30日截稿。<br data-filtered="filtered"><br data-filtered="filtered">1. 陳林<br data-filtered="filtered">博古覽今讀美篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):拙作,以拋磚引玉。<br data-filtered="filtered">2.姜蘭<br data-filtered="filtered">刮肚搜腸對(duì)下聯(lián)。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">3. 婁山<br data-filtered="filtered">費(fèi)雪飛霜寫(xiě)雅章。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):“費(fèi)雪”費(fèi)解。<br data-filtered="filtered">4.孫傳友<br data-filtered="filtered">晃腦搖頭吟古篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">5.熊光明<br data-filtered="filtered">把酒臨風(fēng)歌盛情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">6.李家舉<br data-filtered="filtered">繪景描圖寫(xiě)錦章。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">7.王禮坤<br data-filtered="filtered">賦韻題詩(shī)憶舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">8.馬傳學(xué)<br data-filtered="filtered">依山傍水繪錦繡。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):“山”平當(dāng)仄,“水”仄當(dāng)平,“繡”仄當(dāng)平??筛臑椋喊郎嚼L錦圖。<br data-filtered="filtered">9.宋忠睿<br data-filtered="filtered">煮酒吟詩(shī)賞雪花。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">10.覃林<br data-filtered="filtered">摘句尋章填舊詞。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">11.湛制憲<br data-filtered="filtered">念友思朋懷舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">12.羅毅<br data-filtered="filtered">聚友邀朋開(kāi)老壇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">13.徐洪喜<br data-filtered="filtered">吃醋爭(zhēng)風(fēng)傳丑聞。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">14.劉國(guó)涌<br data-filtered="filtered">攜禮驅(qū)車(chē)回故鄉(xiāng)。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">15.晏銘<br data-filtered="filtered">把盞推杯敘舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">16.陳忠敏<br data-filtered="filtered">造句遣詞出好篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">17.郭福豪<br data-filtered="filtered">閉目低頭憶舊家。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">18.劉丞濤<br data-filtered="filtered">納語(yǔ)吟詩(shī)展錦心。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">19.石元良<br data-filtered="filtered">吟詩(shī)作對(duì)歌盛世。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):“詩(shī)”平當(dāng)仄,“對(duì)”仄當(dāng)平?!笆馈必飘?dāng)平。<br data-filtered="filtered">20.李家廣<br data-filtered="filtered">借物傳情著錦篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):合格。<div><div>21.陳濤<br data-filtered="filtered">看水觀山思故情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">22.劉仲舉<br data-filtered="filtered">游目騁懷吟大江。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">23.何登峰<br data-filtered="filtered">橫槊賦詩(shī)傳古風(fēng)。<br data-filtered="filtered"></div><div>簡(jiǎn)評(píng):優(yōu)。</div><div><br data-filtered="filtered"></div></div> 湄潭縣城夜景