<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">包秋陽 老師</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">吳才生 學友</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 包老師的詩，老是布滿靈氣，讓人讀了愛罷不能，又恍如東風佛面般的暖和，看似泛泛的字句，在您的組合下，布滿了無限的靈感和生氣，“秋詠四首”情景交融“月、雨、葉、思”既有遠望的意境又有近看的趣味，還有思念故鄉(xiāng)回憶童稚的情愁。起承轉(zhuǎn)合恰到好處！</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋月</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天河浮蒼穹，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀鉤照繁星。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">人約黃昏后，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月是中秋明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜雨打窗，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今晨枝頭霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑氣已消盡，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋風陣陣涼。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋葉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金秋景色濃，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">林園碩果豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遍地菊花艷，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫山楓葉紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋思</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋夜思鄉(xiāng)愁，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光映床頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔年童稚趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伴我夢中游。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">近日偶成"秋詠″四首，特奉上，請指教。 ——秋陽壬寅秋于金城</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 昨夜細雨綿綿，醒后久難入睡，晨起四處觀望，秋韻點點在目，忽然想到秋陽老師“秋詠四首”，心有所動，仿照老師四首標題東效西顰試作四首，請老師、同學及各位方家批評指導(dǎo)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋月</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀河浩瀚漫蒼穹，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉盤懸掛伴繁星。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂寞嫦娥何處去？</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清光幾束透窗明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚來風雨打寒窗，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨看花枝染輕霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">煩悶酷暑一時盡，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">整夜甘霖送爽涼。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋葉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清秋萬物色呈濃，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五彩繽紛勢不窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老圃黃花宜歲晚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滿山楓葉透心紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋思</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遙觀古驛思童稚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">師生同室授真知。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五十年后憶昔時，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">啼笑皆非任東西。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">感謝觀賞</span></p>